"Using words that can be understood"

How many times have you told a story to a group of people and each time they retold it, it was different? If you write the story down on paper, the chances are that people will use the same words as you did!

Use words that are understood!

A car load of collage girls are driving south to Florida, for a week in the sun and to have fun. Two of those girls are knock out beauties and were ask to come along as the others know they will attract boys.

As they drove along there was a loud noise followed by a thump, thump, thump. A rear tire had gone flat. They stopped and looked at the tire, then they drove on slowly, watching for a service station to get some help. A duck that was flying south and got close to the window of the driver, looked at the driver and said: anyone want a lift, the answer was “no”  so the duck flew on. They located a service station and the flat tire was changed and they were again on their way south.  Not much later, there was another loud noise,  it was another flat tire.

Again a duck was flying close to the drivers window, he looked at the driver and the driver looked back at the duck, and the duck flew on.

A blond ask, why didn’t the duck ask if they needed help. Another girl said: don’t be silly, everyone knows that ducks don’t talk nor can they

carry a person. The girls pulled off the road and talked about what they could do. One of the pretty girls stood by the car and a passing car saw her and stopped to lend a hand. They had an extra tire and gave it to the girls and placed it on the car for them. Guys will do almost anything with a little encouragement.

The girls arrived at the beach and had a week full of fun and games. A week later, the two pretty girls were returning home, their dream of a fun week-end on Florida beach had been fulfilled. 

The other girls were working as Sand sifters for the resorts and hotels on the beach, Sand sifter are people that rake the sand and remove all the trash that is buried under the sand.   

Then people with metal detectors will go over the sand and dig up what ever is detected. Most of the time, the Resorts and hotels will recover as much money and items from the sand, as they do from renting the rooms.

The rich get richer and the poor go home to practice being poor. I am going to where people play on beaches, want to come along?

By; Ben R. 

July 15.2013